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Silly cats

I have cats, and I can totally see them doing something like this. Witty little creatures. My cat usually wrecks the house in a day or two (she's a killing machine) and then looks at everyone else as if "Hey, why did you guys do that?" so it wouldn't surprise me if she tried this either.

good job, as I mentionned in your journal I think you should have had better art in this. Else it was really awesome.

Awesome

Really awesome style, I was really impressed.
What I thought this lacked was a good voice actor. Or, a good quality to the voiceline. I hope all goes well for you in TOFA.

I liked the style

I liked the style a lot. However, i think you should finish your project before publishing anything here on Newgrounds. I'm looking forward to it.

(I get that it's a trailer, I just don't feel it's nescisary, you should finish your work and publish it all together to be honest)

Loved it

Loved the way you used motion tweening, loved the backgrounds and the movements of the characters. The style is simple and basic yet works perfectly for the animation.

What I however would want to point out that this episode lacks is that the pilot was way to much a pilot. Feels like it gives away what this is going to be about way too much. And I was a bit more excited to see what storylines the aliens had tbh. And what sucked is that the introduction is almost as long as the episode itself.

Also, I get it, the main human character (whatever his name was) is one of those cute sweet guys who falls in love with someone in the first episode. Feels like a Fry and Leela story, except without the raw jokes Futurama pull off.

Toonwerks responds:

Yes, we realized the risk of making it fully introductory. But a pilot is a pilot is a pilot. We've already decided that the second episode will be more lively and have some other shorts planned to head into that direction. Thanks for the review!

Finally!

I've been missing this type of random humour! Great work man!
And your art is amazing. Can't imagine all the patience you must have fbfing all of it.

I aggree with making it longer.

Awesome style of animation and whatnot. Make it longer and I'd give it a 5.

I liked the style

If this movie weren't so short, I'd give it a 5.
But I liked the style a lot, you should keep it up.

I lol'd

I loved the cigarette taking fire in the trashcan! Pwned!

That was actualy good.

But work on the audio. and the bg sound.

PBass responds:

I thought my sound was great, like a police radio in a hurricane.

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